Beat & Motion - Ch. 23

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This girls overly dramatic and yells too much. Can we go back to motion please?
 
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Yeah, melodrama came on a bitlot thick this chapter. Probably could have used another chapter to breathe, but I'm guessing there's pressure to get the story moving again. Still, better to get it all out in the open at once than drip feed us angsty drama over time, I suppose :thonk:

Ultimately it still feels trope-y rather than original, and that makes me sad :aquadrink:
 

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