Behind Your Eyes - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[Weebskeuten]

Looks cool,

But a story has to take a little more setup rn as i feel like i missed a few chapters.

 

[Skadii_]

Heya! Thank you very much,
noted
I'll generally aim to digest the story more and more as chapters progress!

 

[Weebskeuten]

Heya! Thank you very much,
noted
I'll generally aim to digest the story more and more as chapters progress!

Great! Looking forward to seeing what you intend on making.

 

[Ernergeycey]

Very interesting

 

[Ashana]

The art is 10/10.

I felt for a first chapter you were trying to force feed the readers too much information.

The characters and the school environment weren’t properly introduced. I agree with Weebskeuten but, It feels like we missed 2 volumes of this book instead of just a few chapters.

 

[UnvalidUserName]

Looks promising so far. I don't mind introductions being spread around in tid bits during several chapters, so I kind of disagree with the rest. There are some typos but nothing atrocious (like when you wrote spear instead of spare)
I was kind of confused that you are expected to read it left to right despite being english