I didn't read this part, but I went through the first part and found 3 correct apostrophes compared to 18 errors.
pg4 thats
pg5 its (incorrect variant)
pg6 I>m
pg9 she>s x2
pg12 she>s
pg13 Im, I>ve
pg14 womans
pg15 isn>t, doesn>t, that>s, can>t, I>m x2, dont, its (incorrect variant again)
pg 16 shouldn>t