First time translating something NSFW, any critiques on word choice, flow, fonts, sfx I've translated or left out, etc etc are all appreciated! Like, I'm using a few different words for "biku" depending on the context (and sometimes leaving them alone if they don't feel significant), but it didn't click that "shudder" has a much more negative connotation than what I was going for. I was just looking for something more intense than "shiver" for the large "biku" and the "zoku" at the end. Getting a feel for it over time.
I was curious too, how did someone put those tags up and link to the e-hentai upload? I saw other ero works here with those, but I didn't notice any options for them as I was filling everything out.
...whoops, wrong account. Turns out logging out on the main page doesn't log you out of the forums.
