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xenocross Double-page supporter Joined Mar 27, 2018 Messages 71 Aug 2, 2024 #2 The grammar in this release is disappointing. Why use "he" to refer to girls? "I'm came" is also wrong. . Page 6 ,"You" is not used for people not nearby. Should use "she" Page 4, "asking him", should be "asked her"
The grammar in this release is disappointing. Why use "he" to refer to girls? "I'm came" is also wrong. . Page 6 ,"You" is not used for people not nearby. Should use "she" Page 4, "asking him", should be "asked her"
LordTartaros Dex-chan lover Joined Dec 6, 2019 Messages 1,084 Aug 2, 2024 #3 A day without a snipe doesn’t happen in the bocchiverse
