The Dangers in My Heart - Vol. 7 Ch. 91.1 - Extra Chapter

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I like this translation making that last speech bubble on the first page Anna's. For whatever reason, the anon one made it Kyo's, and it felt like he was doing way too much beating her down with that, not to mention it feels like it's pointing at her, anyway, like previous bubbles overlapping her head on the same page. Sure, she doesn't seem to have her mouth open, but it feels better if she's already acknowledging her shortcomings there going into the next page, to be honest. In addition to the earlier point about not making Kyo too much of an asshole.


I will admit, this was a slick way to ask him to go out to eat with her, though. And it's not like he was any better about his word use to describe the meal, either.
 

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