Yo,
@IvanT !
I've read some of your recent stuff, and it isn't as bad as the first 2 chapters; any chance of fixing these so that they're legible?
I really don't quite understand what's going on, other than there was a reincarnation, and some girl killed him, possibly twice.
Outside of that...? 😬
Your recent stuff seems fine, but this one, I can't start.