Boku wa killer - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Weird girl

[MangaDex]

 

[Ma_zuong_lung_mat]

I don't mean to be rude, but honestly, you really should work on improving your art. It hurts my eyes, and I feel like my brain cells are dying just trying to figure out what's happening on the screen. Anyway, good luck

 

[kiraisan]

I don't mean to be rude, but honestly, you really should work on improving your art. It hurts my eyes, and I feel like my brain cells are dying just trying to figure out what's happening on the screen. Anyway, good luck

I understand it's completely fine I'm still trying on making a clean line art but um the thing is readers only spend a few seconds on one panel so I thought I'll just give a little details and wrap it up but maybe as I work more in the future I hope to see it improves thank you for the feedback

 

[Ma_zuong_lung_mat]

I understand it's completely fine I'm still trying on making a clean line art but um the thing is readers only spend a few seconds on one panel so I thought I'll just give a little details and wrap it up but maybe as I work more in the future I hope to see it improves thank you for the feedback

No, readers are picky creatures. Sure, some might only spend a few seconds on a page, but for most of them, details matter a lot. Don’t skip the small stuff

 

[solamente]

I'm having a tricky time with continuity, figuring out who people are especially when the perspective changes between panels, but that's it. Frankly in the era of AI art where anyone can overcrowd a scene with pointless detail, it's more impressive to be able to capture little expressions and the sense of motion you've managed here in so few brushstrokes.

If art isn't your focus here then I would say lean into your quirks more and own it? Storyboard-ish sketching has its own charm. Some mangakas execute this really well and you never see readers complaining because they use it deliberately, e.g for comic effect, dramatic fight scenes etc.

Idk I'm not sure if I'm the target audience for it but there's something in this work that had me thinking "yeah this has the potential to be peak". Like the early drafts for something that becomes a hit later. Just rambling, keep doing your thing!

 

[MelonManic]

"Fucking BITCHES" I mean yeah I'm not a morning person either, can relate ha

I think I cracked the difference...