Botsuraku Yotei Nanode, Kajishokunin wo Mezasu - Vol. 10 Ch. 54

[asphyxiav2]

Page 12 "We won't escape anymore" I

This is supposed to be "we won't let's you escape anymore though"

Page 10 "Bitch"

They're talking about iris after she kicked that blonde idiot.

Imma fix page 12 and 26

 

[Slingerman]

They're talking about iris after she kicked that blonde idiot.

He said 'you have such a deep voice', which is an effect of the mask Kururi is wearing. Also, Iris only kicks someone afterwards (page 13).

 

[asphyxiav2]

He said 'you have such a deep voice', which is an effect of the mask Kururi is wearing. Also, Iris only kicks someone afterwards (page 13).

Ah you mean that page huh, that's just a figure speech like how men also using the slur bitch to their fellow men, but if you're uncomfortable with that I'll just change it to bastard.

 

[Kirin-kun]

So should I just stop scanlating?

No, but you're in dire need of a proofreader that knows English well or, better yet, is a native English speaker. Since your language isn't English, you don't really spot awkward phrasings, incoherencies or missing words.

Scanlating alone is feasible obviously, but how well the dialogues read/flow in a manga is the hallmark of a good scanlator. Ideally, readers shouldn't struggle every other sentence to understand what's going on or reinterpret them until they get it. Some of your sentences don't connect at all. DeepL or ChatGPT aren't really good at interpreting context.

 

[asphyxiav2]

No, but you're in dire need of a proofreader that knows English well or, better yet, is a native English speaker. Since your language isn't English, you don't really spot awkward phrasings, incoherencies or missing words.

Scanlating alone is feasible obviously, but how well the dialogues read/flow in a manga is the hallmark of a good scanlator. Ideally, readers shouldn't struggle every other sentence to understand what's going on or reinterpret them until they get it. Some of your sentences don't connect at all. DeepL or ChatGPT aren't really good at interpreting context.

I don't completely rely on ai though I just use them when there's a kanji I don't understand 🤷‍♂️ also, I don't mind if people points out my mistakes and I immediately try to fix them when someone pointed them out. I'll just do my best to pay attention on my translation next time.

 

[Milanin]

Sorry for the low quality, this is the best I could do using a phone🙇‍♂️

Maybe a rest would be in order?

 

[asphyxiav2]

Maybe a rest would be in order?

Rest is not an option

 

[Arkuses]

Makes sense dude is against it
If he's only seen that sword that MC himself said is a half baked one then he wouldn't be into kt

 

[Chaos47]

No, but you're in dire need of a proofreader that knows English well or, better yet, is a native English speaker. Since your language isn't English, you don't really spot awkward phrasings, incoherencies or missing words.

Scanlating alone is feasible obviously, but how well the dialogues read/flow in a manga is the hallmark of a good scanlator. Ideally, readers shouldn't struggle every other sentence to understand what's going on or reinterpret them until they get it. Some of your sentences don't connect at all. DeepL or ChatGPT aren't really good at interpreting context.

You know, complaining about a free service that is not complete shit is a bit arrogant. The story is not impossible to follow with this level of translation. I know people will complain about shitty translations, I know I have in the past. But when it's at the current level, I don't really see the issue with it not being 100 percent perfect. It could be worse, A LOT worse, so save your complaints for when we are unable to even piece together coherent sentences. For anything else, we'll manage somehow. A weird sounding sentence here and there or a misspelled word is not the biggest deal.

 

[TheProtectorOfPureHeartedGirls]

Fun and sad chapter for Eliza...
Iris, breaking the bones of scumbag people. (Where's the security in charge? Let them get fired!!?)