Botsuraku Yotei no Kizoku dakedo, Hima datta kara Mahou wo Kiwamete Mita - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

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Evil Bad Guy: appears
Damsel: Kyaa!
EBG: Haha! I have you now, my pretty! evil posturing
Hero: Fear not, my lady! casts magic spell (It's super effective!)
EBG: faints
Damsel: I was so afraid!

I mean, I'm not expecting award-winning writing here, but...
 
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I didn't realize I had been reading this
I regret getting to page 10 of this chapter and am thankful I remember nothing else from it
 
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Between 25 and 26 it could either be a missing page or an entire chapter. Like the first half from chapter 10, and page 26 and on are actually page 26 of chapter 11
 
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Wow so we have rapey enslavering people whom the MC just knocks out, also we had the MC go n thought earlier in the chapter "Elves whom are highly sought after" essentially then shock pikachu'd faced when people come to enslave them.

Like others stated it feels like we had like 3-5 chapters thrown into a blender cause theres no continuity here just plot things to make things happen with asspull out of bag level stuff.
 
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Nice. MC really thought that leaving an all-female fairies that just turned into elves all by themselves is a good idea. That and how the author going as far as to make the villains do all that lickity lick thing just to make sure they scream "Look at me! I'm so evil amirite?"
 
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Nice. MC really thought that leaving an all-female fairies that just turned into elves all by themselves is a good idea. That and how the author going as far as to make the villains do all that lickity lick thing just to make sure they scream "Look at me! I'm so evil amirite?"
Not just leave the elves, but leave the newly formed elves right where the fairies were being hunted.
 
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Summon self > order summoned self to go to work in place of original self > original self gets vacation
This sounds like a good idea.
 
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Just dumped a whole lot of shit, seriously am just reading it because it's illustrations was kinda good BUT SERIOUSLY the heck's shit going on here...😑
 

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