Cast as the Murderer - Ch. 4

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Hmmm this got even worse christ. So none of my questions were answered unless I am blind IG. I feel like running I don't know through a fucking window! Is at least a cause for concern and jumping across buildings is surely clearing any faults by already trespassing. Anyway on to the murder, wow thats fucked up. I mean the first two were fairly understandable kinda? I mean they didn't really deserve to die, but this was a hundred percent just cold blooded murder. Even if assistant dude thought she was going rightfully bring them in, actor dude knew otherwise! I expected this to be frank but, wow that fall should've been lethal already due to the dome cracking fall. Even if she survived the fall I am fairly certain she wouldn't have made it far due to all sorts of injuries and internal bleeding. Even so, why did she disappear on the last page? I she lived she must be a god among mortals cuz holy SHIT that would be frankly a miracle and even root for her lol. Anyway I feel bad for her because all she wanted was to get together with her crush but, in the end she got dropped down into a sewer, drowned and monologued post mortem truly a sad death. I assume if they even find her body (IF she didn't magically live otherwise then she might have tried to escape and still died because if she lived that I am calling bullshit). Ranting aside so far a solid 6.5 out of 10 in the plot, 7.0/10 for the characters (they hopefully won't make a trend of killing anyone but, I fully expect any person to be gutted like a fish in here. Along with that I assume actors jumping across roofs and overall being suspicous as fuck would end bad so I am lowering it a bit. This does not include the fact that even if a actor was this good IRL it wouldn't end well if you want an example look at that one dude in the shining "here is johnny" [ps I am not good with names if you couldn't tell so far.), and last but not least the art, I would give it a decent 8.0-9.0/10 due to the falling scene looking kind of odd in the perspective department due to them forgetting the latter in one of the shots along with the fact that the tunnel seems way too long but, I excused the ladder as I can't draw worth shit so I can't judge too harshly. Anyway I got like 4 more chapters to go through, I shall march on.

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