Pretty okay for web doodles, though it rides on drama and angst only. There's barely any characterization to begin with, and even within that limited scope the charater development is nonexistent.
On meta side of things, personally it irks me when contemporary gl drama, presumably lesbian author shills out and writes tl smut (not only because those works very often feel disingenuous, even without knowing the artist's portfolio). Then again we all have to pay our bills I suppose.
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