Chisa X Pon - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

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Wasn't sure how serious the douche's threat level until the last page.

Dude's sly as all hell.
 
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I actually tried to get my TS to do a redo of this chapter, just because of one error that really annoyed me. I've mentioned it elsewhere, but Chisa never says she's "drawn" to another boy, nor does she describe it as a "catastrophe". First she says that she wanted to have the capacity to love someone else, then that the attempt was an utter failure. Makes sense in the situation: she's convinced herself it's just a matter of time before Ponta dumps her, and his increasing frustration is creating all kinds of pain, so she wants to prove to herself that even if they do break up she can indeed love another man, and who better to confirm that than the man that countless girls have already fallen for? But all she felt through the entire thing was guilt and a desire to be back with Ponta.

I've long been a little fast to point out translation errors, but this one was quite egregious since it made it look like Chisa was romantically interested in Takigawa and not just trying to deal with her own situation.
 

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