It's good. I like this story.
The art is great, big plus points to the artist for not copy/pasting to fill in when there's scenes of a crowd, it really makes the world feel more real, diverse and alive.
The translation is good. I didn't even think about it most of the time, which is a good sign, because that means it feels natural and flows very well.
The characters are interesting. There are multiple mystery hooks to keep interest.
The world is very interesting. Very interesting.
I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you for your efforts.
If possible, I hope you will please translate/scanlate more of this story.