Choujin X - Ch. 52.1 - Part 1: Zora's Elimination—Barricade—
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I know this was meant to be an "action packed chapter" but it felt pretty underwhelming.
The fact that the authoor had to resort to exposition explaining the battle shows that he didn't have a great idea of how to present things.
Also, If Zora is getting weaker without drugs then why not just lay siege to the tower and wait for her and their fortress to get steadily weaker? Why not send a bunch of missiles or drones for the first wave? Bad writing if you ask me.
The fact that the authoor had to resort to exposition explaining the battle shows that he didn't have a great idea of how to present things.
Also, If Zora is getting weaker without drugs then why not just lay siege to the tower and wait for her and their fortress to get steadily weaker? Why not send a bunch of missiles or drones for the first wave? Bad writing if you ask me.
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