Class Ten'i de Ore dake Haburareta no de, Doukyuusei Harem Tsukuru Koto ni shita - Vol. 6 Ch. 30.3

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Ok...So I wanted this to have some sort of plot but it looks like it's going to lean too heavy into "Plot" and is now ignoring it's own character building.

Not your fault translator but Imma drop this. Now I do have some I follow specifically for "Plot" but this keeps changing how the character actually acts just to add more sexual encounters.

Previously he was smart, reserved, tried to hide his intentions, and get close enough to explain his story so he wouldn't be ousted or hunted.

Now?

He's just straight up assaulting them in the middle of fuckin combat. It's like the author just gave up on his own story and said "Nah they FUCKIN" which is FINE but thats not what you sold me on you c*nt!
 
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Wall butt seems to be more prevalent in Ero NTR games and games with female protag
Just another weird asf Japanese fetish likely the result of the atomic bombs.
It's like the author just gave up on his own story and said "Nah they FUCKIN" which is FINE but thats not what you sold me on you c*nt!
Like, okay sure, insinuate Sexual Lunatic is actually "The King's Core!" (which I highly doubt since it came from la master manipulator demoness). But atleast fucking show inklings of it before mentioning it by name. 'Show, Don't Tell' should always be the main way to write superpowers.

I've said it on other chapters, but the author dug this plot-less story & useless spectator protagonist themself. They wanted to make ero manga? Do that. They wanted story-driven manga? Ok, ONLY focus on that. I find it a common failure of (mainly) ero games (and partly ero manga) that authors try for ero AND a story-rich plot only to fail by a variety of factors, mostly by being edgy and I think a poor writing ability.
 
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Ok...So I wanted this to have some sort of plot but it looks like it's going to lean too heavy into "Plot" and is now ignoring it's own character building.

Not your fault translator but Imma drop this. Now I do have some I follow specifically for "Plot" but this keeps changing how the character actually acts just to add more sexual encounters.

Previously he was smart, reserved, tried to hide his intentions, and get close enough to explain his story so he wouldn't be ousted or hunted.

Now?

He's just straight up assaulting them in the middle of fuckin combat. It's like the author just gave up on his own story and said "Nah they FUCKIN" which is FINE but thats not what you sold me on you c*nt!
Not the author's fault either It took you 30 chapters to realize a plot literally built around smut will have lots of excuses to show sex.
And if you call that ass-ault, then you should see what's to come.
 
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