Cupid 13 - Oneshot

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Mm! I'd say this is a pretty original concept. As a one shot, it has that rushed, incomplete feeling, but... potential is there. I think a story like this is really rich for comedy in the vein of Spy X Family, but I wasn't feeling it here. It's rough, but there's something there.
 

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