Daiakutou Shounen - Ch. 2 - The Superhuman Strength Hero

[KoffeeStarZ0e]

bro is straight up goofy

 

[StopwatchTL]

Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL
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Weird flex but I noticed more than half of these on subsequent readings. The corrections will go live in a couple of days (I hope).

Some comments from my side:

• p12: The placement of "even" is on purpose since the focus of the statement is on Awesome Daddy "being anachronistic" (時代錯誤) a.k.a. that Eta thinks he doesn't know which period of time he (actually) belongs to. Although both placements would fulfill this purpose.
• p14: So many (trustworthy) sources seem to be using "First-Degree Murder" with and without the hyphen (as if they're interchangeable), but since it is a compound, it should have a hyphen in-between. I looked deeper into it and somehow most people just spell it incorrectly.
• p30: I hated my original phrasing of both parts, but I just forgot to adjust them before release. So thanks for letting me shamelessly steal proposing better phrasings!

And now, the gender problem. I've had a similar problem in one of my other translations where someone's gender was ambiguous, with most signs leading to them being female (their gender was only revealed a whopping two volumes later, and they turned out to be male). So I at least want to wait until the entirety of ch. 3 is released. (slight SPOILER for ch. 3.1: I think everyone knows he's a dude.)

 

[Robinisback]

I really like the fact that the heroes aren't just some influencers trying to act cool and earn money from citizen's taxes but instead they are actual heroes who are willing to help people in need.