Daiakutou Shonen - Ch. 6 - The Worst Day's Great Villain

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its a mall, it would be a pretty long list of people who purchased tent hooks especially if they have to check every supplier in the city and online shopping and people who already had them and potential robberies
True, but he would be literally the first result, since he has just bought them, and in a shop right next to where this confrontation happened. And left the hooks themselves behind, helping narrow it down
 
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True, but he would be literally the first result, since he has just bought them, and in a shop right next to where this confrontation happened. And left the hooks themselves behind, helping narrow it down
Presumably will, he can still control them

Point is theyre common enough that no one would think to try to track him through them short of a superpower
 
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He is a teenager with actual nine grader syndrome power. Cut the guy some slacks yo.
That isn't an excuse to turn off all of his brain cells, he should at least be able to tell when shit is about to hit the fan.

Although, his summon seems to be decently smart despite being born from him so maybe it'd be revealed that he was purposely being dump or something.
 
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Man, those family bits actually hurt :meguuusad:

I was kinda hoping he'd go all Condiment King and shoot hot sauce down their throats. 'twould be quite amusing.
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL
  • p10 the news are on -> the news is on
  • p11 I got no -> I've got no
  • p12 kinda feel off -> feel kinda off
  • p12 just as I expected from -> just as expected from
  • p15 underestimate them and be sure -> underestimate them and you're sure
  • p15 four years ago they -> four years ago, they
  • p18 inconvenience we caused -> inconvenience we've caused
  • p20 that many who are -> that many people/citizens/onlookers who are
  • p20 better to not stay -> better not to stay
  • p24 I wish I never -> I wish I'd never
  • p25 wish their eyes to be -> wish their eyes were
  • p26 this will not -> this won't
  • p35 So he started carrying things he can manipulate from the very start. -> So he was already carrying things he could manipulate from the very start.
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL
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As always, thank you for your service.
  • p10 the news are on -> the news is on (note: you learn something new everyday...)
  • p12 just as I expected from -> just as expected from
  • p15 four years ago they -> four years ago, they
  • p18 inconvenience we caused -> inconvenience we've caused
  • p20 better to not stay -> better not to stay
  • p24 I wish I never -> I wish I'd never
  • p25 wish their eyes to be -> wish their eyes were

Anything not mentioned wasn't changed.

(Side note: In case anyone reads this, chapter 1 received a remaster due to the availability of better raws coupled with the expansion and improvement of my font library. And no, Blambot's "Anime Ace 3" will probably stay as the main-dialogue font.)
 

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