takes him by his waist and feeds him
"Remember my taste alone"
In Page 3 (and page 18) the lack of sfx is deliberate as I think the SFX is ubiquitous enough for the reader to understand even without TL/TS, but you're right, I should have at least included a TS alongside.Missing SFX CLRD/TL on page 3 and page 10, should say RUMBLING or something along those lines.
Missing CLRD/TL in some of the boxes on page page 10.
There's also some minor grammar/punctuation issues here and there.
I mean, I kinda like him. He is useless but it isn’t like he’s wallowing in self pity about it (or at least not anymore) and is making a genuine effort to better himself with slow but steady results. He’s a bit too self-deprecating for my liking but I also haven’t seen his backstory for how he became like this other than he was taken advantage of in his former workplace and quit, so I can let it slide.There's credit to be given to the author for really writing a "useless human". You really don't feel pleased as a reader to see the way he acts, and you find yourself frustrated with his actions every time, which is how someone looking on should feel about a person who lives in that self-destructing headspace. I'm really glad he's not just "occasionally the best guy of all time" nor does he get many silver linings, but instead he genuinely just kind of sucks.
Yeah, I think that's what makes this story surprisingly great. To me, his actions are hard to watch, but the fact that he's at least acting is worth commending. You can very gradually see him improving and working to cross certain bridges(even if his thought process usually isn't the best), which makes him feel so much more grounded. It's refreshing to see a manga with a "useless" person where that person is not only slowly doing better, but isn't just randomly flawless nor does he offer many redeeming traits.TLDR: I can deal with a “useless” person that’s trying to change over one that’s comfortable in their little puddle.