Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu (Fan Colored) - Vol. 3 Ch. 166 - Invitation to Chaos

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Hana did the unthinkable in jealousy. It was textbook example of "Seku-hara".


Hana is crazy in this chapter but, she is attractive like those of "Don't get involved with crazy." type. But she is crazy who you can't put aside.



In the last page, inner craziness of page 3 has reflected in page 6. I made it like the inner-hana broke through the wall of sanity.
Face is multiplied with slight red-ness hue of insanity.


New FaceShadow meanings.

Blue -> Malice
Black -> Despair
Purple-> Horny
Red-> Crazy
I always love the result of drawing, I never know how it will end up, until I draw. And I look forward for the result what it will bring. This Hug arc is so entertaining. It looks like it hasn't been 1.5 years. We are into 16 chapters of 100 chapter - day 3 arc.
 
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First things first:

P2:
...SENSE OF REJECTION TOWARDS WOMEN... <-I would say the color of that text is too dark + small typo.

P3:
"Ah... so 'Satou Sou' really does hate girls after all..." <-end quotation mark is missing
And another thing is missing - Hana's beauty mark!

P5:
AH.. JUST IMAGINING "THIS GUY'S" BEAUTIFUL FACE... <-Hana always emphasizes "that guy". "that man", etc.
It should be colored in Sou's blue like with all the other times she uses that kind of phrasing.

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Now, the chapter... especially Hana. Exceptional work, Geako... her expressions are a blast. I love it.
That look on her face on the last page really truly brings out her outburst of insanity.

Thanks for the cleaned versions.

Edit:
What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!" :D
 
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First things first:

P2:
...SENSE OF REJECTION TOWARDS WOMEN... <-I would say the color of that text is too dark + small typo.

P3:
"Ah... so 'Satou Sou' really does hate girls after all..." <-end quotation mark is missing
And another thing is missing - Hana's beauty mark!

P5:
AH.. JUST IMAGINING "THIS GUY'S" BEAUTIFUL FACE... <-Hana always emphasizes "that guy". "that man", etc.
It should be colored in Sou's blue like with all the other times she uses that kind of phrasing.

--------------------------------------------------

Now, the chapter... especially Hana. Exceptional work, Geako... her expressions are a blast. I love it.
That look on her face on the last page really truly brings out her outburst of insanity.

Thanks for the cleaned versions.

Edit:
What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!" :D
P2: 'Towards' and 'toward' both mean the same, it is mainly preference of speaker. toward is more preferred in American english.

p3: hana's beauty mark is left by author himself by mistake I will correct that. "" missed by translator, I will correct that.

p5: author has wrote whole box in purple, I do not color his original colored text, I change color for neutral left color. ( which is usually black, sometime white in background).
 
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What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!" :D
Hana was lost in cosplaying for sou in various ways, also thinking of pervy-freindship. So, she was already lost when Hana was about to speak. Her eyes were 'lightless', she hasn't processed yet well what Hana told to Sou.
 
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p5: author has wrote whole box in purple, I do not color his original colored text, I change color for neutral left color. ( which is usually black, sometime white in background).
Is that so? Hm... I admit, personally I would have recolored it anyways because I assume it was an oversight by the author, just like he forgot Hana's beauty mark. Reason: consistency and such. But I won't insist on it.

she hasn't processed yet well what Hana told to Sou.
Aya sure hasn't grasped Hana's lunacy yet. Neither does Hana herself realize what she just let loose there. No, I don't talk about how she risks her sister's reputation and dignity as a guard, not to mention the safety of her escort target.

Demanding Sou to hug every girl in the classroom includes Hana herself. She can be glad that Yuri "volunteers" right away to hug him unprotected. In that situation, if I had been Sou, I would have noticed how the other girls hesitate. And to melt the ice I would have asked Hana to take one for the team and show them how it's done (to get wrecked).
 
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it's finally here! i've been waiting for this arc:meguupog:
I was waiting this for so long. I know I'm creator, yet I was waiting as fan.

Code pink, I repeat soldiers, Code pink, the Huggening is a reality, everyone take shelter, the flood is inevitable :notlikethis:
Code Black: insanity breached reality. 😵
Commander Yuri-chan to take the charge. 😈

This Hugapocalypse will take time, my end-sem is imminent.
 
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First things first:

P2:
...SENSE OF REJECTION TOWARDS WOMEN... <-I would say the color of that text is too dark + small typo.

P3:
"Ah... so 'Satou Sou' really does hate girls after all..." <-end quotation mark is missing
And another thing is missing - Hana's beauty mark!

P5:
AH.. JUST IMAGINING "THIS GUY'S" BEAUTIFUL FACE... <-Hana always emphasizes "that guy". "that man", etc.
It should be colored in Sou's blue like with all the other times she uses that kind of phrasing.

--------------------------------------------------

Now, the chapter... especially Hana. Exceptional work, Geako... her expressions are a blast. I love it.
That look on her face on the last page really truly brings out her outburst of insanity.

Thanks for the cleaned versions.

Edit:
What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!" :D
I concur with Geako in this instance, and "toward" is just "the American way" of saying "towards". Otherwise I would have to find fault with your writing "color" because the true and only way of spelling it is "colour" (/s).
 
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You know, it occurs to me that a lot of these misunderstandings could've been completely avoided if Sô's mother had been forthcoming to the school about his "near-total amnesia" and how he's subsequently shown a total lack of any knowledge or instincts about what everyone in this world takes for granted. At the very least, they should've made sure his guard students knew this from Day 1 so that they'd be extra watchful over him (just look at how terrified Sumire was when she learned he had walked to the convenience store all alone).
 

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