P2: 'Towards' and 'toward' both mean the same, it is mainly preference of speaker. toward is more preferred in American english.First things first:
P2:
...SENSE OF REJECTION TOWARDS WOMEN... <-I would say the color of that text is too dark + small typo.
P3:
"Ah... so 'Satou Sou' really does hate girls after all..." <-end quotation mark is missing
And another thing is missing - Hana's beauty mark!
P5:
AH.. JUST IMAGINING "THIS GUY'S" BEAUTIFUL FACE... <-Hana always emphasizes "that guy". "that man", etc.
It should be colored in Sou's blue like with all the other times she uses that kind of phrasing.
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Now, the chapter... especially Hana. Exceptional work, Geako... her expressions are a blast. I love it.
That look on her face on the last page really truly brings out her outburst of insanity.
Thanks for the cleaned versions.
Edit:
What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!"![]()
Hana was lost in cosplaying for sou in various ways, also thinking of pervy-freindship. So, she was already lost when Hana was about to speak. Her eyes were 'lightless', she hasn't processed yet well what Hana told to Sou.Edit:
What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!"![]()
Is that so? Hm... I admit, personally I would have recolored it anyways because I assume it was an oversight by the author, just like he forgot Hana's beauty mark. Reason: consistency and such. But I won't insist on it.p5: author has wrote whole box in purple, I do not color his original colored text, I change color for neutral left color. ( which is usually black, sometime white in background).
Aya sure hasn't grasped Hana's lunacy yet. Neither does Hana herself realize what she just let loose there. No, I don't talk about how she risks her sister's reputation and dignity as a guard, not to mention the safety of her escort target.she hasn't processed yet well what Hana told to Sou.
I was waiting this for so long. I know I'm creator, yet I was waiting as fan.it's finally here! i've been waiting for this arc![]()
Code Black: insanity breached reality. 😵Code pink, I repeat soldiers, Code pink, the Huggening is a reality, everyone take shelter, the flood is inevitable![]()
I concur with Geako in this instance, and "toward" is just "the American way" of saying "towards". Otherwise I would have to find fault with your writing "color" because the true and only way of spelling it is "colour" (/s).First things first:
P2:
...SENSE OF REJECTION TOWARDS WOMEN... <-I would say the color of that text is too dark + small typo.
P3:
"Ah... so 'Satou Sou' really does hate girls after all..." <-end quotation mark is missing
And another thing is missing - Hana's beauty mark!
P5:
AH.. JUST IMAGINING "THIS GUY'S" BEAUTIFUL FACE... <-Hana always emphasizes "that guy". "that man", etc.
It should be colored in Sou's blue like with all the other times she uses that kind of phrasing.
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Now, the chapter... especially Hana. Exceptional work, Geako... her expressions are a blast. I love it.
That look on her face on the last page really truly brings out her outburst of insanity.
Thanks for the cleaned versions.
Edit:
What I always found a bit weird is Aya's expression on the last page. I would have expected her to look shocked. Well, it might be like "what the fuck did that sister of mine just do?!"![]()