Dark Web

[MangaDex]

 

[DimaManga]

a slow start but i'm interested to see where this gonna go

 

[Baroona]

The creator of this doesn't understand the most basic principles of storytelling. Where's the hook? 3 chapters in and still no semblance of a story or even a hint of what's going on. No world building. No exposition. No reason to care. Think of how manga like Berserk, Vagabond, or Vinland saga start. They have a really small initial conflict, which instantly captures your interest, while using said conflict over the next few chapters to relay information about the world and the larger issues. All we can guess at is that it's some form of simulated reality take on the deep web. The character backstory amounts to normie girl, normie boy, and nerdy boy. The sum of all conflict in the initial 3 chapters is some rando massacre and a guy getting laughed at for being poor. Jeeez, I don't take any writing courses nor have done any study (school or otherwise) into storytelling, so it just goes to show how glaring the problems are with this story.

 

[thebenefactor]

I really like both the story and the art and wish the creator all the best! 😊

 

[Edgekin]

So we deal in comics now. That's cool as well.

 

[donutholer]

annnd dropped.

 

[Kageshinogi]

This looks interesting.

 

[es_kan]

Oof, what's with all the close ups?

 

[Kirin-kun]

"bigotry"? No need to go on the darkweb to find that. It's everywhere.