Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyousoukyoku Ex: Alisa Oujo no Isekai Funtouki - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Bye-bye Japan

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[rudeus_greyrat]

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[Alicia]

thank you for the chapter~

 

[Kidawesome55]

Not a bad translation but your grammar could use some work.

 

[rudeus_greyrat]

@Alicia
It's a pleasure, Alicia-san ^^

@Kidawesome55
Do you have any advice or some example of corrections?

 

[zz2000]

Mangaka's the same one who did Kagetora, which was published by Tokyopop.
https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=590

 

[abear]

p.4.a why is it so cold? / why does it feel so cold?
only use "bad" when there are no other choices like: ominous, oppressing, suffocating feeling
b what the heck
p.6 it's bright red / what a deep red (red isn't really quantifiable). "so much blood", if it fits
not an expert but aren't fujoshi and BL redundant here? (go with 'from my fujoshi folder' if you need more characters)
p.8 a if you keep rubbing your hair like this, you'll go bald, you know?
("if you keep losing your hair over this", if it fits)
hair is a woman's best friend
the chief dumped/forced a lot of work on me
e with little effort (a little effort = still an effort)
f go with "surveys", it's shorter
is not no urgent that it needs to be done after work hours (if it fits)
p.9 a the required format is the same as before?
full-time worker
b hurry and go see your girlfriend
I'll pay you back / I'll return the favor
Forget it/don't worry about it, just go!
c I wish them to have a great dinner/a wonderful time
let's get this done/let's do this
and then back to my own work
e if you guys don't have any work left, just leave!
p.10 b I finally managed to report that stalker to the police yesterday /
We managed to file that complaint about yesterday's stalker (whichever best fits)
c I would do anything for my cute kouhai
d if you wait for a bit
following me like this (she actually is asking for a stalker, instead of no man at all, right?
are you sure it's not "I wouldn't mind some company myself?")
e according to what she told me / she told me
I'll try and do the rest later (no promise)

 

[Drifter]

Thanks for this. Arisa was an interesting character from the original who has, sadly, just become background. The artist needs to spend a few seconds online, searching for pictures of two year old toddlers though. She looks to be five at least.

 

[scripted]

Demn this might sound bad but I'm excited what happens on the

Spoiler

event of the kingdoms ruin and how she managed to end up in the slaver

 

[yamajii]

🙂i see the Brazil already translate up to 6, hope you to translate the others too, thankyou for the update and keep up the good work

 

[mitsuki48]

Mm...I'd be more eager to read this spinoff if I didn't know how it ends for her 😭

 

[larcek]

waited for

Spoiler

Lulu

to appear, nope, not yet at least

 

[kuzunagi13]

hmm.. i guess she used her prev knowledge and didn't apply necessary conversion like Takarakuji MC did?

 

[Samael]

GJ people! I always wanted to know what did she left in the tower she destroyed later!!

 

[xSauriaNx]

ah man... knowing how everything goes in that world... T_T

Arisa really is best loli in the series... followed by

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Lua

then Mia comes after... xD

 

[rudeus_greyrat]

@abear
Thanks a lot, Abear-san. Someone else sends me a few more corrections and now I have enough to a version two.

@all

Arisa-chan is the best waifu S2

 

[abear]

np, thanks to you for your work.
And yes, Arisa best waifu (in10-12 years )

 

[hikufalafel]

Now I see why she hates stalkers.

 

[mismarca]

oh so that's how her former self looks like.

 

[Rugid]

First chapter seems pretty uninspiring. Maybe it will become better later, but... Scanlation for this is a mess: translation, typeset, and scans not only saved in jpg, but with such low quality that you can see jpg artifacts even with naked eye. Totally unappealing to read.