Ekiden Bros - Ch. 3 - He Called Me A Toothpick

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The pacing with that timeskip felt weird. Like they were going to get into the whole long distance training arc, and then thought, nah, let's just skip that whole thing and get him straight into college. Three chapters in and it's not standing out in any way. Fourth chapter will hopefully introduce some hooks...
 

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