Erika Won't Back Down - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Disaster of Passion

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Wow that was quick, I hope you got an assistant eh.
I am loving it, every page feels dynamic, like it has a style on its own and it doesn't feel like you are holding back at all, every page feels as detailed as it can be, I don't know if you used a 3D skeleton as a basis for page 15, but it looks much more refined than it "needed" to be. I love the cinematography of it all, it makes me wonder if I didn't miss some details

The way you incorporate these references reminds me a lot of Hi-score girl. Erika is sexy but also very cute. Inarikawa looks cool, but not in a way like the typical MC look, who too often look like they are trying be too non specific, like they have to blend in.

Typo in page 22, it should have been
"You should've caught it and given it back to me, you know"
page 23: "rescue the boys first, we can't let them BE captured by purple mist"
 
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love the artstyle and alr hyped for the next chapter!
Thank you so much! Next chapter will be next month because i have animations and commissions to do! Please look forward to it!

Wow that was quick, I hope you got an assistant eh.
I am loving it, every page feels dynamic, like it has a style on its own and it doesn't feel like you are holding back at all, every page feels as detailed as it can be, I don't know if you used a 3D skeleton as a basis for page 15, but it looks much more refined than it "needed" to be. I love the cinematography of it all, it makes me wonder if I didn't miss some details

The way you incorporate these references reminds me a lot of Hi-score girl. Erika is sexy but also very cute. Inarikawa looks cool, but not in a way like the typical MC look, who too often look like they are trying be too non specific, like they have to blend in.

Typo in page 22, it should have been
I'm still working on it alone, hehe.
Thank you so much! Working on chapter 2 actually helps me learn a lot about this and that, that somehow made me working on chapter 3 a bit quicker. I hope next chapter can deliver lol, i was inspired a bit from Hotline Miami.

I really liked Hi-Score Girl! It was so sweet, and the girl didn't even mutter a word but damn if it ain't a masterpiece. Lol yeah, since i designed Erika based on a Hokkaido fox, and fox folklore surrounding Japan, i definitely won't make her look, or trying hard to blend in or low-key.

Thanks again, and for the typo correction!
 

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