Wow that was quick, I hope you got an assistant eh.
I am loving it, every page feels dynamic, like it has a style on its own and it doesn't feel like you are holding back at all, every page feels as detailed as it can be, I don't know if you used a 3D skeleton as a basis for page 15, but it looks much more refined than it "needed" to be. I love the cinematography of it all, it makes me wonder if I didn't miss some details
The way you incorporate these references reminds me a lot of Hi-score girl. Erika is sexy but also very cute. Inarikawa looks cool, but not in a way like the typical MC look, who too often look like they are trying be too non specific, like they have to blend in.
Typo in page 22, it should have been