Existence - Ch. 7

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If this story continued in the manner portraited in this chapter, it would be so good. I like rooftop swordmaster btw.
Instead it went to shit and became a love story. Love stories are great, if you know it is one when you start reading it, not when it becomes one afterward and when it's not supposed to be.
 
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If this story continued in the manner portraited in this chapter, it would be so good. I like rooftop swordmaster btw.
Instead it went to shit and became a love story. Love stories are great, if you know it is one when you start reading it, not when it becomes one afterward and when it's not supposed to be.
It's ch. 7, this is about as close to the start as you can get to establish a premise.

Them highlighting the phrase "I Love You" for several chapter prior, learning about what love is from his mother, and ending this chapter with him replying "Me Too" like some grand revelation made it pretty obvious this story is going to be about him coming to learn more about love, at least to me.
Ch.0 also showed him thinking about a girl (who I assume would be the love interest), so I don't know what to tell you.
 
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It's ch. 7, this is about as close to the start as you can get to establish a premise.

Them highlighting the phrase "I Love You" for several chapter prior, learning about what love is from his mother, and ending this chapter with him replying "Me Too" like some grand revelation made it pretty obvious this story is going to be about him coming to learn more about love, at least to me.
Ch.0 also showed him thinking about a girl (who I assume would be the love interest), so I don't know what to tell you.
I don't mind it having LOVE in there because its LOGICAL that topic HAS to come into play based on the premise of the story. His Mother DIED because of her Love for Him, He MURDERED everyone because of his Love for Her. But he only experienced Motherly Love. Next is Lover with a Partner. Love for ones own child. Etc but your still gonna have these murderous elements because the nature of the world and his existence are in DIRECT CONFLICT with each other. And there is being killed MILLIONS of times to boot. MOST JUSTIFIABLE VILLAIN EVER!
 

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