Seems interesting but its impossible to follow, I literally don't understand anything that is going on, why did he , I don't get anything that's going on in this story all that I know is that he's some kind of alien who has to work for his freedom? Probably dropping this because I can't follow anything and the story makes no fucking sense, great job author or remaker you fucked up your story.
EDIT: spoiler doesn't work, why tf does this platform suck at forums.