Goblin's Ascent: From Loser to Winner - Ch. 4

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Haiz, bad writing, bad plot progression, the only selling point left is the "mating" and it just got glossed over in a few panels. There's no worth in continuing this anymore.
 
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Haiz, bad writing, bad plot progression, the only selling point left is the "mating" and it just got glossed over in a few panels. There's no worth in continuing this anymore.
It remains censored sadly, but it wasn't too bad. Also thicc milf dragon!
The primary downfall is even though he used his intelligence, he could have saved a lot of time just acting like Rou. Every human aside from the Sword Saint is very very dumb which was a real shame. He made good plans and it would have been nice to see him struggle or fail against an equal. Instead it looks like he will primarily fight other goblins to establish an Ainz-like empire beneficial for everyone's well being. Goblin competitors are his only real challenge so far.
Also very funny Goblin S(layer) cameo.
I hope one day the early part will be rewritten, and the whole series upgraded to H like that one dungeon milf comic, the writing slowly improves however still feels a bit "skippy"
This getting the Mushoku treatment would really bump it up!
Thoroughly invested later in seeing the Sword Saint stand against him directly and if she'll join the harem. Unexpectedly, just being a hot girl is no guarantee, some I thought would be rescued/captured died!
Currently feels like that rebirth box zombie apocalypse manhwa, where the zombies nor raiders were not the real threat. We are still "in the prologue"
 
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I was going to headcanon that they didn't know she was female since female goblins don't exist, but then the chief called her "her". I won't drop this on only chapter 4 for bad writing but damn. At least stick with your premise that long
 

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