Typo on pg2:
TTHE -> THE
there's also quite a few sizing issues with the pages as the widths don't align.
The concept itself seems pretty cliche as I've read like a million baihe novels with the same concept, but I guess we'll see how it turns out. You can contact me at @fortwoq and I can probably qc your translations every week or so if you need any help.
Also, just an off topic remark, but your group's name is the same as
https://love4baihe.blogspot.com/; at first, I almost thought they started translating manhua as well. I thought it was pretty interesting nonetheless. Finally, nice job on the cleaning and redrawing, it looks good!