Page 18: "It granted me power that surpasses your own." Not "you"
Page 19: "His magical power is greater than sister's." Not "My"
If you just replaced all pronouns with "X" it'd never be correct and somehow still make more sense.
This is something I will never forgive and overlook (just like the constant changing of character names here). It's one thing to use MTL, that is generally fine, but MTLs need human supervision, because they regularly get things and especially pronouns wrong, which any human would pick up from context.
