Gal Assi - Vol. 3 Ch. 24 - Let me hear what ya think!

[MangaDex]

 

[Mangamoz]

Well done kid, rip that band aid off now before it escalates further.

No good would have come from telling her sweet lies now for easy points with her.

 

[Robinisback]

Rookie award arc incoming?

 

[theshet]

Is this gonna be like Nagatoro? Where she will weigh her ability to write a manga and be on her own before confessing/getting together?

 

[marzial09]

good on the MC being honest with her at least she doesn't have to suffer the humiliation of sending a crappy story like that

 

[MiguelH224]

I would've lost way more respect for MC if he went with lying to her


Then again I barely have any for him to begin with

 

[araya_tatsuya]

I would've lost way more respect for MC if he went with lying to her


Then again I barely have any for him to begin with

 

[Aliamus]

"So, it's like this, "
<White noise.mp3>

 

[Chronigan]

Thanks for the chapter!

He cares more about her success than his happiness. These two really need to get together. We are at the point where they both realize they have feelings for each other but won't act on it. Hopefully this won't go on for too long.

 

[kuma]

see the difference when character actually communicate.

 

[Adul0]

Honesty? In a manga? Blasphemy!

 

[Nemo2342]

Honesty? In a manga? Blasphemy!

Seriously we could have gotten AT LEAST 3 chapters out of him dodging her questions and being misunderstood when he tried to lie about the manga before being forced to fess up.

 

[Keetonman]

Wow, for once a trope not being abused. He actually told her. I'm impressed.

 

[raze2012]

Hey, worked for this manga

 

[blablablub]

She could write a story about a gyaru assisstant getting together with her mangaka classmate.

 

[Jadeite_McSwag]

W

 

[Iosif]

She could write a story about a gyaru assisstant getting together with her mangaka classmate.

The mangaception is what we want anyway. A manga about a gyaru assistant getting together with her mangaka classmate and the assistant writes a manga about a gyaru assistant getting together with her mangaka classmate so we can have gyaru assistant manga in our gyaru assistant manga. That makes it gyaru squared, and that function is an exponential increase to the infinite.

 

[NikoBellic9]

My guy had an emergency defecation situation

 

[Coldlight]

So he managed to tell her the truth and give her some constructive criticism, actually proper feedback. And his worry is actually justified for once because she took it poorly at first, but managed to recover quickly. I guess I'll grant him one vertebra gained, but not enough to say he's grown a spine, yet. Should I believe that he's actually beginning to develop?

 

[Zwamp]

Straight criticism is ok, if you give solutions on how to improve it.

Just saying that the pacing is bad is not a good way to criticize someones work. Saying that the pacing is bad so here is how you can improve it and make it feel more natural is the way to go.