Gal Yome no Himitsu - Ch. 28

[Quroh_JG]

No sex? Sad.

 

[AnotherDuck]

I'd like to see them try to fire them and realize how important MC and FMC are after and how the development falters.

Yeah, that would be my expectation if they tried.

I love the Wife's logic that the smoke smell will drive women away. That's Chad level marking your territory.

I find it lacking trust. And also disgusting.

 

[SchultzD]

So the doctor is a man of the W124 culture. Or am I just seeing things?

 

[DarkeLourd]

I'd like to see them try to fire them and realize how important MC and FMC are after and how the development falters.

I don't think they're that dumb. They're both team leads so I assume the company understands how valuable they are. Especially considering the guy who hired them in the first place was pretty understanding about it.

 

[Chronigan]

@KMSMainz just have a couple of questions and notes.

On page 5 what did she mean by "I guess you wanted to be careful with her"?

On page 6 "I'll send you home" should be "I'll take you home"

Page 7, why does she call him dense?

Page 8 "to repel you from other women" should be something like "so that other women are repelled by you"

 

[AdmiralSilver]

LET THEM FUCK!

 

[MewOne]

Thank you for the sl!

 

[CT-9904]

What a pair of dorks

 

[dowiet]

and then they... slept

 

[EulBassist]

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[Grye]

So close to smut

 

[JagdPanther]

So the doctor is a man of the W124 culture. Or am I just seeing things?

Certainly looks that way.

 

[Alesund]

 

[Me]

Smoking in a car is just bad. Someone smoking in mine would get thrown off, possible before I stop.

And that's why you're not married to a busty goth chainsmoker.
...
Well, I presume it to be a factor.

 

[Geardofwario]

Only he (and the readers) can see her acting all cute.

 

[orangerain7734]

did he give her a bite to mark her? based.

I do wonder if someone from the company will notice how that mark will match MC's shark teeth.

If somebody is that attentive over there, that couple would be fuuuuuuucked.

 

[Angelonius]

He didn't get boober'd?

 

[Quroh_JG]

My sick mind thought we were on Hitomi, and they were gonna take her to their home for you know what
Wait, you know what? That is a good premise for a NTR hentai. Now I wanna draw it

 

[Chronigan]

I'll admit it, I was hoping for sex in the end.

Yep, that would of been great.

 

[AnotherDuck]

And that's why you're not married to a busty goth chainsmoker.
...
Well, I presume it to be a factor.

Smoking is less of a 🚩 for me, and more of ⛔. The other two traits are not important.