I can see why the editor didn't like this ending. A lighthearted series dealing with a seriously dark moment for the climax of the story. It can be jarring to witness just like what happened in this series. However, it was nice to see the city supporting and secretly missing the cop ladies' antics after what happened.
Overall, I enjoy this work. Raunchy slice of life of two bimbo cops doing their job. Very sexy and very goofy moments throughout the story. After working a long shift, reading a smutty work to shut your brain off for the rest of the day can be relaxing.
Thank you for completing this project.