Goodbye Body

[MangaDex]

 

[sevenfacedbird]

*final edit - February 2019* I finished the new version of this with better raws and typesetting.

 

[J4mag]

I like it. The bestiality is a bit much but otherwise it's an interesting take on loss

 

[criver]

6/10 for originality. It was okay, not enough effort spent on the characters for me to care about though.

 

[Crookshanks]

Yeah could have been beautiful with some light tweaks. Dialogue was a lil clunky ("print it from my mouth") beastiality was probably unnecessary but it seemed like the author wanted it in there pretty bad. Big meh