Haiiro no Onmyouji - Ch. 28 - Fire and Transient Pt8

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Ah yes, the compressed training montage. Where would manga or anime be without it?
 
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Thx for the tl, although there are a few obvious mistakes... (cmon man, you should know the difference between "your" and "you're" xD)
 
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Thanks for letting me know. Errors have been fixed. Hopefully there's no more lol.
"It's just that there has been two idiots crazy enough who were willing to approach kuragari" is not a proper sentence xD

You should change it to "It's just that there were two idiots who were crazy enough to willingly approach Kuragari" or something similar.

Ty for your TL and correction efforts :3

Edit: instead if "there were", maybe "there happened to be" would fit better.
 
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