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gronkle Dex-chan lover Joined Nov 10, 2018 Messages 2,185 Dec 6, 2024 #4 @FortSpeedwayACC have you got an editor? I can't really offer much help myself, but there is a lot of poor grammar and clunky phrasing here that could do with being cleared up.
@FortSpeedwayACC have you got an editor? I can't really offer much help myself, but there is a lot of poor grammar and clunky phrasing here that could do with being cleared up.
friendly Dex-chan lover Joined Oct 25, 2018 Messages 1,715 Dec 7, 2024 #5 I really like how this chapter resolves- the sense of letting the flow take things. Besides, there's no changing a train-loving man....
I really like how this chapter resolves- the sense of letting the flow take things. Besides, there's no changing a train-loving man....
bitfarb Dex-chan lover Joined Dec 13, 2018 Messages 874 Dec 7, 2024 #6 Hang in there, Senpai! Dude's super focused on his interests, but that doesn't mean you can't be one of them! And it's always a treat to see Koharu again.
Hang in there, Senpai! Dude's super focused on his interests, but that doesn't mean you can't be one of them! And it's always a treat to see Koharu again.