Hanninmae no Koibito - Ch. 5

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i think that he will be more impressed and smitten than disappointed when he finds out why she missed their meetup
 
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girl, at least contact the guy if you have problem with the promise..
 
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I feel like the plot moves a bit too fast, like it skips certain bits about introducing characters and stakes properly. Kinda like some pages were ripped away from the manscript or something
like the editor or the mangaka was like:
girl have crush on guy by ch 1, date by 6, and drop full random stuff. It has no setup and no stakes
 
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More chapters where they just do random stuff might've helped set a pace. Still I prefer this compared to needless stretching
 
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I feel like the plot moves a bit too fast, like it skips certain bits about introducing characters and stakes properly. Kinda like some pages were ripped away from the manscript or something
Ngl when I read this, I instantly thought of kanokari because this is the opposite of that series where kanokari author stretches the story to the point it makes it so boring to read
 

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