Hazama Sandwich - Ch. 2

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This is going to end with the three of them living together, isn't it?
I'm gonna hold your balls while I say this...
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Thanks for the translation!
Not too surprised it ends there, I feel like the concept was interesting but probably would have fallen off a bit quickly.
Like there wasn't that much substance to it (I guess?). idk.
 
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Thanks for the translation!
Not too surprised it ends there, I feel like the concept was interesting but probably would have fallen off a bit quickly.
Like there wasn't that much substance to it (I guess?). idk.
I think it could have been a fun 1-2 tankobon story, like 5-10 chapters, but it definitely could've dragged on too long easily. I'd love to see someone do the "I can see affection points" better than "If you could see love" or whatever it is. The ending for that still makes me mad to this day...
 
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I think the story failed because of the girl who falls in love easily, someone who falls in love with ANYONE is a dangerous person to fall for :nyoron:

Either way I feel bad for MC, I liked the design of the chars and I liked the personality of the chars
 
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I was most interested in the deeper self-reflection from Riri that was sprinkled in and then glossed over. It was never meant to be, but I would've loved to read about Riri's struggle with emotional permanence that stems from all love in her life being shown to her instead of implicit; how she feels detached from people's lives and unable to fathom that she means something to someone. Not even necessarily in a romantic sense, because I think Himawari's relationship with her was a good example of how it could've been written.

Unfortunate it had to end so soon, but I'm not disappointed. It was marketed as only two chapters from the beginning after all.
 

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