Hazure Skill "Kinomi Master"

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Apart from the name, this looks like generic garbo relying on that agarian dream that seems so many Japanese officer workers hold wishing for a simpler life. I’d honestly read this out of boredom if that was it, but the whole op thing makes it go from lame to turbo lame. The MC doesn’t have to be powerful to be interesting, but I guess hack Japanese authors have to make it so since it’s the only thing going for the MCs because they are complete pathetic losers.
 
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Honestly, if the mc just killed the evil people in front of him that he has full justification to do, also wasn't a massive push over and used his brain, he could probably make this readable, but I have gotten so bored of these pg heroes
 
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Yeah pretty generic and the drama is bad, but I honestly liked the interaction between the MC and his group, the action scenes are descent and the MC is not dense as a rock
 
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Pretty shit and generic ngl, also why doesn't he just fucking eat a shit ton of nuts if he's immune to their poison? retarded mc as always.
While he's immune to the poison, there are other side effects of the fruit. When he ate those three during that one battle, doing so took a large toll on his body.
 
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Ohh man I really enjoyed this, I can't believe it got dropped however I'm not going to give up on it and I'll wait for someone to pick it up and continue with it. Yess it's boring and the MC too OP but still pretty interesting to read
 
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cliche after cliche and not the well made cliches, the guy has the most op skill that allows him to have as many skills as he wants when other people can only have one but he doesn't use it every day but saves it for the plot armor "attaining a critically useful skills only when in desperate situations", also they are naive as fuck and with that unbearable sense of justice EXCEPT when it matter (letting/helping the person that literally tried to kill you and in the process unleashed a fucking SSS rank monster that will probable kill numerous innocent people)... anyways it's pretty bad imo
 
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Honestly, if the mc just killed the evil people in front of him that he has full justification to do, also wasn't a massive push over and used his brain, he could probably make this readable, but I have gotten so bored of these pg heroes
Not even PG heroes. PG heroes at least try to put villains away for life and it's the prisons that can't keep them in.

These dumb "forget all crimes" heroes are C4 in a world of PG14 and it's so frustrating how inane these authors seem to be. I'm starting to wonder if it's the publishers forcing authors to hit tropes and stick to uninspired trash? There can't be this many employed authors who suck so hard at storytelling, can there?
 
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2 days of work just to get rejected without a reason or any communication, I posted it here if you want to read it.
bit of a let down tbh
 

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