My japanese may not be perfect but this means 金貨200枚 200 gold coins not silver right?
Honestly so much is wrong or missing...
Also the sentence with the servant quitting wasn't wuss like it. It was:
I will step down as a servant.
Do you still want me escort the young lady?
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He didn't say a break... He said Quit being a servant.
fucking stop rewriting scum...