Hi no Ryuu no Kuni - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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A lovely suprise. Ishii Asuka is very underrated. Loved his other works. Looking forward to read more of his new series.
 
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@F2PP Spotted a few issues with this chapter.

The first 2 page spread was split up and in the wrong order
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There is a missing page for a spread in the middle of the chapter:
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There is was an extra duplicate page:
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I will be going ahead and fixing the misordered spread and removing one of the duplicate pages, but the missing page does have an untranslated speech bubble.
 
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@F2PP Spotted a few issues with this chapter.

The first 2 page spread was split up and in the wrong order

There is a missing page for a spread in the middle of the chapter:

There is was an extra duplicate page:

I will be going ahead and fixing the misordered spread and removing one of the duplicate pages, but the missing page does have an untranslated speech bubble.
I'm sorry about the extra work I caused, my mistake, I added the missing page as well
 
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I'm sorry about the extra work I caused, my mistake, I added the missing page as well
No problem. Thanks for adding the missing page!

Although it is also ordered incorrectly ...
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Fixing that in a sec.

But looking forward to seeing more uploads from you! (y)
 
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No problem. Thanks for adding the missing page!

Although it is also ordered incorrectly ...

Fixing that in a sec.

But looking forward to seeing more uploads from you! (y)
damn i messed it up again lol, sorry, i would translate more chapters but its MTL and idk how people feel about something like that
 
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@F2PP Spotted a few issues with this chapter.

The first 2 page spread was split up and in the wrong order

There is a missing page for a spread in the middle of the chapter:

There is was an extra duplicate page:

I will be going ahead and fixing the misordered spread and removing one of the duplicate pages, but the missing page does have an untranslated speech bubble.
No offense but the first split and miss-ordered double page is still split and miss-ordered. I didn't read after that because I'm not interested, so I don't know for the other things to correct.
 
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No offense but the first split and miss-ordered double page is still split and miss-ordered. I didn't read after that because I'm not interested, so I don't know for the other things to correct.
Its still split, but its not mis-ordered anymore. Looks fine to me in double paged mode.
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This feels very much like a oneshot, with a pretty weak call-to-adventure.

Kid learns she's Naruto, fucks up her friends, and then goes to school.
uhhh?

Tbh, I'd prefer it much more if the MC kept on being in the forest for a few chapters, and then learning something about the dragons, and makes the hard choice to leave her home to learn more.
 
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p7, "Shanley". p31, "Sharry". p34, "Shanrii". p37, "Sharly".

The text is also inconsistent about Windblade Hawks, Windcutter Eagles, Windcutting Eagles, and Kazekiri Eagles.
 
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That opening is a beat for beat rip off of Nausicaa. The most blatant I've ever seen. Seriously go read and compare.
 

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