His personality is actually interesting and not some generic happy go lucky "lord" who is naive and trusting to a fault and begins to cry the moment a conflict begins? maybe I'm still dreaming...
Seriously!
This could've been an email 3 pages, and we could've had a story instead of a single bubble of exposition, with a single bubble of dialogue, per page.
The artist is great; wonderful, even!
But... so.e story would be cool, too.
Since it's supposed to tell a story, and all...