Hinekure Ryoushu no Koufukutan - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Loyalty

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Man Noein is rly something else personality wise but i mean ofc he is lol. Thouse eyes thou damn
 
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I usually don't rate things until they're over, or at least well established.
 
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Quickly rate this to 8+ stars, unless you're female, but then you will have a -3cm rod?
 
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His personality is actually interesting and not some generic happy go lucky "lord" who is naive and trusting to a fault and begins to cry the moment a conflict begins? maybe I'm still dreaming...
 
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Distorted but benevolent is a good combo really. I'm rather excited to see where this goes.
 
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I like how the art is so gentle and like the eyes mean something else but the story is also pretty damn distorted
good chapter and story so far
 
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Meh
Hope this gits gud, soon; I looking for big golem world-building, and messy self-loathing that drives his father to having a stroke
 
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The art is carrying so hard for now
Seriously!
This could've been an email 3 pages, and we could've had a story instead of a single bubble of exposition, with a single bubble of dialogue, per page.
The artist is great; wonderful, even!
But... so.e story would be cool, too.
Since it's supposed to tell a story, and all...
 
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so as far ch.3

the art is ok. face expression still need few work. they need to decide if they want cartoonish or serious.

story so far.... garbage.

another world full of psychopath and sociopath and unbalance superpower
 

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