Hisshou Dungeon Unei Houhou - Ch. 18

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Does anyone else think that in page 32 her arm and hand are too small?
 
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@RiceNipple the artist in this manga have weird way to draw after all to put it nicely
Also this seriously the part i hate the most even in WN version and i think the LN didnt fix it eh considering the adaptation also like this, i mean just to many thing jumble into mess and forced people just to understand what happen
 
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@Fuew12 if you are talking about the Saint arc I agree, otherwise I have to point out that this is what the novel is about, mocking the cliché tropes. The author purposely skips them: this is so common so I gonna leave them to you to comprehend and jump right into solutions, expect anti-climatic conclusion will ya? But then, it may be the result of his bad writing, jumping around a lot and doesn't focus on a single matter.
 
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I think the much earlier chapter of the noble announcing his plans right in front of the dungeon while all the captured knights in the dungeon are watching it on a full cctv, should give you the idea that this manga was never really heavy on plot progression.
 
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I've read the WN and I'm also super lost. It's amazing how the artist can draw all this and make no sense at all from a plot perspective. Need a supplementary book to understand the story rofl
 
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@MavB_Ver if being anti-cliche and jump to conclusion then maybe i can stomach it but this one just to horendous with how the event end up with jumbled mess, manga at last quite better since there visual but WN/LN pretty much nightmare about how to discern the sequence.
Its not like i not get what happen but how many time i think how the event end up in that situation really escape me here, well later part at last give more clear sequance of event fortunately
 
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dammit did the author don't know what flowing story is?
infodump is way better than disconnected jumping scene on each panel.
 

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