Houkago, Family Restaurant de, Class no Ano Ko to - Ch. 10

[Des1469]

I had forgotten the plot until now (Skill issue tbh) but without context, it almost sounded like Kohaku died in the first half of the chapter

 

[GIN_8_6_]

Finally a mandatory beach ⛱️ 🏖️ arc and we will get to see kazemiya in her swimsuit

 

[ppaaccoojrf]

This manga was already pretty bad, but this chapter was especially bad so I need to vent a little.
The writer has never shown to have any idea about how people act, so let's just ignore the fact that the sister's mind immediately goes to suicide somehow, despite the fact that anyone with half a brain could tell that would not improve Kohaku's family situation in the slightest.
Even ignoring that huge point, nothing makes sense. Last we knew of Kohaku, she was planning on stuff to kill time with with MC. There's no reason to assume that she would go look for her sister.
Even if she did go look for her sister, there's no reason to assume she could have found her. They're supposed to have ran away far from home, so in theory neither the sister nor Kohaku should be familiar with the area. It was already weird that the sister was able to find Kohaku immediately, so I assumed they'd reveal she had a GPS tracker or that she had hired a private investigator or something, but no, apparently in this world people just find each other randomly by looking for them a bit.
And the reasoning given to how Kohaku found her sister immediately is that "she always goes to the rooftop" when she feels down.
How did she know her sister felt down? How did she know which rooftop to go to? Is this the rooftop at their apartment? Did both of them go back all the way home just for that talk?
I'm not against turning my brain off for a comfy or funny read, but when it gets to this level in a story that's trying to be serious I genuinely feel insulted.

 

[EldritchNeko]

So the mom seems to feel guilty towards her daughter as well but it probab will be some stupid explanation which wont justify her making Kohaku suffer at all. Honestly i hoped the character of her sister was a little more better written

Doubt it'll be meant to 'justify'. I'm getting more of a "live with the guilt" vibe.

 

[kmd3133]

I said it was a sui bait for sister but i didnt expect her to realize that she is wrong this fast which is a nice development. I wonder about the mom now. Thank you for the translation.

 

[kmd3133]

This manga was already pretty bad, but this chapter was especially bad so I need to vent a little.
The writer has never shown to have any idea about how people act, so let's just ignore the fact that the sister's mind immediately goes to suicide somehow, despite the fact that anyone with half a brain could tell that would not improve Kohaku's family situation in the slightest.
Even ignoring that huge point, nothing makes sense. Last we knew of Kohaku, she was planning on stuff to kill time with with MC. There's no reason to assume that she would go look for her sister.
Even if she did go look for her sister, there's no reason to assume she could have found her. They're supposed to have ran away far from home, so in theory neither the sister nor Kohaku should be familiar with the area. It was already weird that the sister was able to find Kohaku immediately, so I assumed they'd reveal she had a GPS tracker or that she had hired a private investigator or something, but no, apparently in this world people just find each other randomly by looking for them a bit.
And the reasoning given to how Kohaku found her sister immediately is that "she always goes to the rooftop" when she feels down.
How did she know her sister felt down? How did she know which rooftop to go to? Is this the rooftop at their apartment? Did both of them go back all the way home just for that talk?
I'm not against turning my brain off for a comfy or funny read, but when it gets to this level in a story that's trying to be serious I genuinely feel insulted.

Sui part was obviously a bait from last chapter, and the reason sister not doing it is kohaku. About the part how sister found kohaku, money solves many things. Its literally the rooftop of the building they r spending time thats why she knew which rooftop, plus if you have a family member you spend a lot of time with you can understand what can upset them. In this case, sister turned away for a day with empty hands which means she can be upset. You need to use your brain to fill the gaps with common knowledge instead of turning it off (these are all my speculations from what i can understand about the story). But i dont like drama part that much too just turn your brain off enjoy wholesome parts and have fun suits more to me now. i just feel like you just didnt read it with an open mind.

 

[ppaaccoojrf]

Sui part was obviously a bait from last chapter, and the reason sister not doing it is kohaku. About the part how sister found kohaku, money solves many things. Its literally the rooftop of the building they r spending time thats why she knew which rooftop, plus if you have a family member you spend a lot of time with you can understand what can upset them. In this case, sister turned away for a day with empty hands which means she can be upset. You need to use your brain to fill the gaps with common knowledge instead of turning it off (these are all my speculations from what i can understand about the story). But i dont like drama part that much too just turn your brain off enjoy wholesome parts and have fun suits more to me now. i just feel like you just didnt read it with an open mind.

No, I already explained why using your brain makes this story not work at all.
Like I mentioned, big sis finding Kohaku could have been explained through a gps or hiring an investigator or something. It's never explained but I'm willing to give that one away.
But Kohaku finding her big sis makes zero sense. When the sister left, Kohaku was left talking with MC thinking about how they're going to pass time next. There's zero indication that she noticed something is wrong with her sister, and therefore zero indication that she'd go look for her.
Next, the problem is that MC and Kohaku are far away from home in another town. It's not explained what building the big sister is at, but assuming it's their apartment building or somewhere close to it, it means Kohaku would have to travel a long distance to go see her sister there. Which would be possible if she knew something was wrong, but we're never given any signal that she realizes this. It also leaves us with the nonsensical arrangement of big sister travelling a long distance to see Kohaku, then coming back on her own, then Kohaku coming back as well with just a slight delay, then probably Kohaku returning to the other town to meet up with MC again. Makes no sense.
And that's without taking into account that the sister should be able to realize that killing herself will just make everything worse for Kohaku. Kohaku will feel guilty about her sister's death, their mother will blame her and now no one will be left to be her ally at home. Kohaku would be forced to run away for good and be left completely alone without a family. It makes no sense that the big sister wouldn't be able to think at least this far ahead.
You can make up scenarios about what happened to fill the plot holes, but you can always do that with any series. This series is still terrible.

 

[kmd3133]

No, I already explained why using your brain makes this story not work at all.
Like I mentioned, big sis finding Kohaku could have been explained through a gps or hiring an investigator or something. It's never explained but I'm willing to give that one away.
But Kohaku finding her big sis makes zero sense. When the sister left, Kohaku was left talking with MC thinking about how they're going to pass time next. There's zero indication that she noticed something is wrong with her sister, and therefore zero indication that she'd go look for her.
Next, the problem is that MC and Kohaku are far away from home in another town. It's not explained what building the big sister is at, but assuming it's their apartment building or somewhere close to it, it means Kohaku would have to travel a long distance to go see her sister there. Which would be possible if she knew something was wrong, but we're never given any signal that she realizes this. It also leaves us with the nonsensical arrangement of big sister travelling a long distance to see Kohaku, then coming back on her own, then Kohaku coming back as well with just a slight delay, then probably Kohaku returning to the other town to meet up with MC again. Makes no sense.
And that's without taking into account that the sister should be able to realize that killing herself will just make everything worse for Kohaku. Kohaku will feel guilty about her sister's death, their mother will blame her and now no one will be left to be her ally at home. Kohaku would be forced to run away for good and be left completely alone without a family. It makes no sense that the big sister wouldn't be able to think at least this far ahead.
You can make up scenarios about what happened to fill the plot holes, but you can always do that with any series. This series is still terrible.

im not arguing about serie being terrible but, i just filled the plot hole as i understand bc when i talked about rooftop i meant the rooftop is the same buildings rooftop which they r spending time. so its just a random rooftop, kohaku finding her sister just means that sister goes to rooftops whenever she is upset. thats what i meant, but yeah there are plot holes in every serie while some are intentional and some are not.

 

[ppaaccoojrf]

im not arguing about serie being terrible but, i just filled the plot hole as i understand bc when i talked about rooftop i meant the rooftop is the same buildings rooftop which they r spending time. so its just a random rooftop, kohaku finding her sister just means that sister goes to rooftops whenever she is upset. thats what i meant, but yeah there are plot holes in every serie while some are intentional and some are not.

I understand your point, but that doesn't really work. The place where they're spending time is a family restaurant. While sometimes you can find them inside larger buildings (like shopping malls), usually they're just single buildings with 1 story, at most 2 including their parking lot. And that seems to be the case this time.
The rooftop where the sister goes to seems to be an apartment complex rooftop.