Houkago wa Kenka Saikyou no Gal ni Tsurekomareru Seikatsu - Kanojotachi ni Sukarete, Boku mo Saikyou ni!? - Ch. 14 - Oneshotting

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I like how, in this version, Kohinata is already openly showing possessiveness over Shiki this early, even if it's not something she'd say or act on directly...yet.
This ain't that kind of manga but I feel like Touka would try to worm her way into a threesome between the two leads if this were age-rated higher
She's trying now, age-rating be damned.
Touka is all bark and no bite. If Shiki made a move on her, she'll get all flabbergasted and not know what to do.
Hahahahano. Her skills are not a fantasy. They've come in handy before and they will again.
 
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A little mistake in page 19. The translation got it reversed.
Ikaruga might challenge people to a fight, but if the opponent refuse, he would step back. That’s why you can avoid fighting him just by turning down his challenge.

"One Shot"... Do you mean like Special Move?
Or secret move. Literally it’s something like “kill on first encounter”. The idea is, there’s this move that nobody knows (maybe heard of, but never saw what it is) that can incapacitate the opponent instantly. Because the opponent didn’t know of it, they never knew what hits them, or how to defend against it.

Of course, it also means when the element of surprise is gone, such as when you fight the same opponent again, or from people who saw how you do it, then the effectiveness is very much reduced.
Like the “Oh hi, Kohinata-san!” move. People might get tricked a few times, but then they know it’s just a bluff.
 
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Yeah I'm not saying she's not useful or important for the plot lol she definitely pulls her weight.

I'm only saying the author went a little overboard this chapter, like half of it is Touka getting handsy
Not really,she's just having fun once after 13 chapters.
Touka is all bark and no bite. If Shiki made a move on her, she'll get all flabbergasted and not know what to do.
Well,this is some whiplash,did you not read chapter 12?...at all?...

She has most likely quite literally bitten folks whilst making them bark all night long...if she herself wasn't getting bitten and barking all night long...

How on Earth would you expect her to get flabbergasted when this chapter itself involves her showing him the goods?...
 
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Thanks for the chapter, NGS. Proofreading needs work in a few places, though--more than I would have time to go over.



If Touka didn't look the way she does, you could bet there wouldn't be so many people here complaining about her sexual antics. Mind, I hate that the only time I can see a girl like Touka is either as a secondary protagonist (or worse, not even a protagonist) or flawed (in this case, Touka is dissolute--a slut), or both (as Touka is here), but it's not a surprise: I can already see what kind of person the author is based on his characterization of this MC-kun--there are many out there like him who repeat the pattern. People like this author really don't like big breasts.

That aside, Touka says on page 22 that Ikaruga's the only person Karin's ever had difficulty fighting. Where have I heard that before?
 
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thanks for the chapter!
Thanks for reading!
Proofreading needs work in a few places, though--more than I would have time to go over.
PR is a role I've always had difficulty maintaining (even tho it's the easiest, lol). It's not fault to the people who do PR (it's already a miracle everyone is willing to do this for free). I also need to get better in my own review skills, but I'm always afraid because I'm tainted by the fact i know what is happening in the original. Will try to get better myself, and give extra attention to PR.

Thanks for the advice!

A little mistake in page 19. The translation got it reversed.
Ikaruga might challenge people to a fight, but if the opponent refuse, he would step back. That’s why you can avoid fighting him just by turning down his challenge.
Missed it, thanks for it! I got mixed up who was rejecting who.

Literally it’s something like “kill on first encounter”.
Yeah, i went for a more liberal translation because "kill on first encounter" sounded REALLY rough. And considering it's also used in the context of games, i used the term "oneshot", like "One shotting your opponent" in the sense of "Killing him in one single shot". Could have done better tho. Will work on it in the future. Thanks for pointing it out!
 
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Despite his menacing introduction here, Minesweeper is a loveable idiot :D
And he do service to the society by sacrificing himself to mark which girls are the crazies you better avoid.
Yeah, i went for a more liberal translation because "kill on first encounter" sounded REALLY rough. And considering it's also used in the context of games, i used the term "oneshot", like "One shotting your opponent" in the sense of "Killing him in one single shot". Could have done better tho. Will work on it in the future. Thanks for pointing it out!
One-shot sounds better and more natural in the casual conversation imo. Just meant to add to it since we got this comment forum anyway to fill in with the details :D
 
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Despite his menacing introduction here, Minesweeper is a loveable idiot :D
And he do service to the society by sacrificing himself to mark which girls are the crazies you better avoid.
Welp, i haven't seen much of him yet, just been working on the manga sadly.
 
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Why the hell is Touka still in the friend group? The only reason they like her is because she's good at martial arts and work for them.
There is always going to be that one friend who is an asshole but you don't mind because he's your asshole.

She actually cares for her friends. I don't think they hate her for her shenanigans. She does let her friends hit her, so I guess that cancels things out? Maybe they actually find it funny.
 
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Welp, i haven't seen much of him yet, just been working on the manga sadly.
He’s really a bro who simply wants to have a good fight.
Although, the girl he had a crush on is always those crazies.

Ikaruga’s faction has a lot of people who just like to fight, and he’s their token leader. So unlike Arai or Aguri’s top-down structure where the followers do what their boss says, they mostly just do what they want, but with a banner to unite under.

And he’s the guy who Arai see as equal. They often had friendly fights, and became friends.
So looking at that, Shiki beating Arai really look like a fluke and Arai taking him too lightly.
Karin’s words, in term of fighting, Ikaruga is like a the superior version of Shiki (he doesn’t have superior physical build like Arai, scheming skill like Aguri, or refined techniques like Karin; and his moves are mainly focused on kicking moves).

Also I forgot if it’s Ikaruga or Arai’s assistant whom Touka said she’s not interested because he got small dick.

She actually cares for her friends. I don't think they hate her for her shenanigans. She does let her friends hit her, so I guess that cancels things out? Maybe they actually find it funny.
Yeah, when people get closer, they would learn each other’s limit.
She knows it’s okay for her to show this kind of thing to them, and they will still let her go with a beating. It’s an annoyance, not something unforgivable. And I guess it gives sense of comfort because they know Touka trust them enough to show them this kind of behaviour, and Touka can feel their friendship is strong enough to not break just from this much.
 
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PR is a role I've always had difficulty maintaining (even tho it's the easiest, lol). It's not fault to the people who do PR (it's already a miracle everyone is willing to do this for free). I also need to get better in my own review skills, but I'm always afraid because I'm tainted by the fact i know what is happening in the original. Will try to get better myself, and give extra attention to PR.

Thanks for the advice!

You shouldn't be so worried: properly understanding the original text gives you better ability to produce a translation than the likes of a scanlator who just OCRs some text from a bubble and feeds it to a translation site, or anything similarly low-effort.

As long as you remember that the story is not yours, and therefore always seek to convey the original intent of the author as best as you can with the tools the English language provides and intelligence (e.g., understanding that, because there's no direct translation to English for them and the vast majority of manga readers are familiar with them, honorifics should not be translated), you'll do fine.
 
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You shouldn't be so worried: properly understanding the original text gives you better ability to produce a translation than the likes of a scanlator who just OCRs some text from a bubble and feeds it to a translation site, or anything similarly low-effort.

As long as you remember that the story is not yours, and therefore always seek to convey the original intent of the author as best as you can with the tools the English language provides and intelligence (e.g., understanding that, because there's no direct translation to English for them and the vast majority of manga readers are familiar with them, honorifics should not be translated), you'll do fine.
Got it. Thanks for the support and advice!
 
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No one's gonna mention how Momozono was seriously locked-on there? If there are zero brain cells behind those eyes, there might be enough space for some bottomless thirst :meguupog:

I'd be surprised if author wouldn't have Kitou use Ikaruga against MC somehow. Not sure how exactly (maybe weaken MC for lil bro? kinda simple for 200 IQ schemer, though), but seeing last two chapters focus on both of them just makes this an obvious conclusion.
 
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Thanks as always for your continued support! And sorry for being kinda late on this one, but between having to switch Raw Provider and getting distracted by a YLIA rewatch, it took a little bit of more work to translate...

A big thanks once again to everyone on the team, i hope you enjoy this chapter!
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