Houkai Sekai no Mahou Tsue Shokunin

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I like the concept with the electricity and the witches. Also a story about a magic engineer that is a bit more thought out than those other ones like the blacksmiths that just create op items usually for themselves only with no real explanation other than the guy is OP. Heads up the MC in this isn't OP and is kinda a loser so...
 
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This was a really great read, loved the mc, he is smart and actually has a process to his creations. The first chapter is huge and it felt like 3 (good thing), I think this story has some amazing potential.
 
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Ch 2 was good, however ch.1 was quite a bit better. This chapter felt quite a shorter, which was a tad bit disappointing. And there was a lot less focus on what the mc was doing, you could show more of the process of him making, polishing or just generally producing stuff. The first chapter was amazing, and if you can reproduce that sort of quality, length, and detail I doubt anyone would mind having to wait longer. Personally I believe that if you take more time and add as much if not more detail that was in the first chapter this could get a great following (and I would be super happy). The level of depth you (the creators) had in the first chapter made it one of the best reads I have had in ages. Take as much time as needed to produce content that you can genuinely feel happy with, don’t worry about a schedule.
 
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Ch 2 was good, however ch.1 was quite a bit better. This chapter felt quite a shorter, which was a tad bit disappointing. And there was a lot less focus on what the mc was doing, you could show more of the process of him making, polishing or just generally producing stuff. The first chapter was amazing, and if you can reproduce that sort of quality, length, and detail I doubt anyone would mind having to wait longer. Personally I believe that if you take more time and add as much if not more detail that was in the first chapter this could get a great following (and I would be super happy). The level of depth you (the creators) had in the first chapter made it one of the best reads I have had in ages. Take as much time as needed to produce content that you can genuinely feel happy with, don’t worry about a schedule.
This is just a scanlation site bro unless it says otherwise the one uploading isn't anyone official. I agree with you though as chapter 1 and 2 is only 4 chapters of the WN. Check out the author's twitter and let him know yourself if you really want too, they're pretty active. Just don't bring em back here lol.
 

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