Tsuihou sareta Fuguushoku "Irozukai" ga Sekai wo Nurikaeru made ~Bishoujo-darake no S Rank Party de Saikyou Skill no Hontou no Tsukaikata wo Shiri Mu…

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Skill sure suffers from a massive downside in regards to time from preparation to execution. Here they were thankfully able to withdraw to some cover, but he's at a disadvantage for any situation that would require him to "whip it out" instantly.
 
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I mean, there is an idea with real potential here but, the execution is about what you would expect from "banished from a party, now I'm OP" these days. Still, I am curious enough to stick around and see if this ends up as slop or just a mediocre series with naked women.
 
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Chapter 2 should tell you everything you need to know, and is available on asmo's website
 
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For real?
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Okay. Well we get naked girls, so why not.
 
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Banishment slop has always been the most thinly veiled “I’ll show those jerks who fired me that I’m really good at my job actually and they’re the ones who suck” comfort fantasy possible

so I guess… points for honesty for forgoing all subtext and literally making an abused artist the MC? But otherwise this was so fucking generic you could plot it on a spreadsheet
 
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The biggest problem is why did this guy become an adventurer. He didn't get enough training to understand his ability. From his previous understanding of his skill, wouldn't he be better off joining the military?

If he insists on being an adventurer, he should be jumping parties guiding newbies.
 
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Haven't read beyond the first few pages yet, but why would a party that's trying to make its way to A rank wait until they got there to drop their dead weight, and why did they ever have him as part of the party? In other stories like this there is at least a bit more justification about why there would be some "useless" party member in the first place. But as I read this one it feels like the MC should have seen the writing on the wall forever ago and should have submitted his own resignation in order to stop holding the team back.
 
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I remember reading another similar slop, but the dude ability was sending him back in time when he gets killed and the EXP was accumulating, and he got seen by a magician with the magic eye, but wasn't an S rank, also it turned into slop too in the end, as the mascot turned into a girl. My point is this is some big slop. I forgot the new titles recommendation were so bad.
 

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