Hull: The Living Cargo - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Defiance

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Nice work. Framing and movement/speed dynamic is quite good. Line art is still a bit messy but I think will improve over time. The backgrounds however need some improvement. Its hard to figure out what's going on in some frames.

For example p.27. Is there a carpet or hole. Hard too see at first glance.
Or p.25 floor and ceiling is hard to pick apart.
 

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