I Became the Mother of the Sub-Male Lead's Son - Ch. 11

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There is some disasterously bad pronoun/person confusion in this chapter. The entire conversation while they walk about why she saved Rian is written as if she saved the duke. If the TL is reading this, I recommend a complete redo on that, because it's really confusing.
 
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:questionblob:when the fuck did she saved him?
i don't remember any of that...
 

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