Already bored with proofreading?
Just 3 chapters in, and it's already a mess.
"My lady baby The baby lady"
"Did I not tell you whose child I am she is?"
"Look at this old woman man's head"
"You're I'm not her mom"
"Burden" ???
"She's actually asking me him to hold her"
"the first person who looks like me touches me and doesn't freeze me"